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Needs a bit more in the animation department, but the art style is nice to look at! If you're gonna pull a Narmak you're going to have to boost your animation skills and the length of the videos. I look foward to seeing more! Good luck!

Astrobust responds:

Thanks for the feedback and for taking the time to check it out my work. I look forward to contributing more while I improve

I wanted to give this 3 or 3.5 stars but it went black and left me unsatisfied. Feels like a lack of effort when the animation just cuts off not for the sake of pacing or a joke, but when the creator just gives up or doesn't want to finish it. It was your choice, but I enjoyed the art style and kinda wanted to see it finished.

YOUR SPEAKING TOO FAST
Also this "Hahahah Newgrounds can host my work too, but really though go to my youtube channe and like and subscrible hahah" thing is a really classy way to become part of this community guys.

bornracer responds:

i am 100% sure that i am not speaking fast but rather you are not able to understand my native language thats hindi and some of it which is in english is most probably because of my accent i guess
and whats the harm in sharing my newgrounds as well??

Nice after effects rain, but besides that animation was lacking and the voice over was so quite you needed to put subtitles in. I feel like this could be fleshed out more, but there's a chance that the creator only wanted to promote a message rather than tell a story. However, if you wanted to tell a story there's not enough here to tell one.

OSART responds:

Noted. Thanks for the tips and everything. You are on point. Definitely wanted the message to be put out there and I can be more strategic in delivery visually! :D Awesome

When you wanted to make porn but then changed over action but then got bored and made it into a slapstick comedy but then you decide to dump all the themes into one big bowl and mix it together and bake it in a preheated oven until golden brown.

hinca responds:

wow thats actually what happend, i changed it several times and then mix the ideas O_O

Change the rating. This isn't E for everyone. I would personally rate it a hard T or maybe a soft M. I enjoy seeing your skills improving with rigs and tweens, but you still have a ways to go. It's good to see you're still making some kind of content. Even if it's this.

YowLifeProductions responds:

No Nudity, No violence, No explicit audio, No Explicit text, and No Adult themes - that's what I checked.

"I enjoy seeing your skills improving with rigs and tweens, but you still have a ways to go. "
Could you please elaborate more? What part of the animation do you think could be better and could you provide an example?

I can tell you're more uncomfortable with this character than my others, possibly due to the design. So because of that, you find this video of less quality than what you usually see.

I'm very disappointed in you, you know better

This could be good, Just need to improve the animation and stop switching between the few poses you have. It was really noticeable with Dakota who is going to die of alcohol poisoning before episode 2

Stories not too bad either, but some things are kinda ehhh like the lesbian relationship. It could be good, but it need more time to develop, more hinting rather than just, "I KNOW YOU WANT IT, BITCH!" "N-no sempai I just want to love the benis like all the other grils" "lol no fam u gayer than a twink in a locker room"

Give you voice actors a round of applause cus... They good! I think this is what saved this whole thing from being just another peice of media cast into the ocean of content.

I hope you continue to improve your animation so you don't have to rely on switching back and forth between poses, but I enjoyed watching this! The voice work was good, and the story can shape up into something great. GOOD LUCK FOOLS!

GoodLuckFools responds:

Thanks a lot for your input and also for enjoying the show. I have put a lot of thought into this show and the reason I chose this animation style was not because I can't hand animate, it's because I plan on posting episodes more than just once every 3 months haha.

My style is simple but effective. This is something I have learned from years of game design where you draw these long 16 frame animations just for a single action only to see the game flop. I grew up playing Disgaea...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6fotlteFZio&t=4361s

Always loved their cut scene mechanics with frame switching, I just felt that they could have done more and so I am trying it out. If I can put an episode out every 2 weeks, this frame switching technique will be worth it and you might grow to love it because by then, hopefully I will have a lot more episodes and you'll be invested in the story more so than the hand drawn run animation that took a week haha.

Thank you again for you time, your interest and all around great review, I appreciate it!

GOOD LUCK FOOLS!

I like this, I wish it was done better though.
The animation kind of has a charm to it, but If the audio and acting was better I think you could have a much better series going!

NonS3XualActionFig responds:

Yeah, this was because of a lack of resources available to me at the time. This episode was actually very rushed and difficult to make for me at the time. I was working with so many limitations, but I was happy to complete it. Thank you for watching!

Nice little teaser. The lettering in "SONIC" was off at the end and the spacing was kinda off as well

OfficialfABs responds:

Thanks, can't really tell with the letter spacing, honestly it uses a really weird font haha.

Oh hey! it's great to see theodd1sout make it to Newgrounds.

It's a good start, but I think you need to develop your own style. keep with it!

inkanimations responds:

alright thank you

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