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This has some really cool ideas in it. The art quality is decent enough to get some idea across, scenes like the rat nightmare made me chuckle. But I'm not sure what the tone it's going for as the tags say creepy and suspense, but really if feels surreal humor with the art style and writing.

Orsolonn responds:

Thank you for the feedback :)

finally got around to removing the watermark!

The audio of the sfx is fighting with the game music and is only in the left channel. This could be cool for having the soundscape move with Samus, but it kind adds to the muffled nature of the SFX because they're only in one channel. (Just saw your description, I feel you there)

A suggestion for the floor of the environment is to have a reason why samus jumps over that area like a bigger hole that isn't traversable or maybe some acid or spikey plants to match the background. It looks very cool to see her morph ball to wall cling, to jumping over into a run, but she just could have hopped over that area with no trouble and kept running so the pacing feels sluggish due to extra movements (But it does look cool so there's that).

This is still a storyboard so it's cool to have fun with things in a stage where reworking them won't take too much. Interested in seeing what else is is being done with this idea! Don't lose to the audio!
Edit: No worries! Keep up the good work!

Buster98 responds:

Yo! I really appreciate the feedback dude. I didn't even realise half that shit, so that's super helpful.
I'm currently working on another animated short rn, but I definitely wanna return to this after.

Thanks again! 🔥

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Music kinda loud. I enjoyed hitting Noire with a bat.

This was seriously fun to play!

Always the black goo with people always black sludge. No need for keys.

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Hell yeah!

Entertaining

lol well this was fun it kind of reminded me of a funny video I saw the other day on twitter, I don't know who made it but if I did I would shout them out here. I like the ending part especially tying everything together.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
You should get a girl to sign louis parts so that it sound more like the tv show

~Ozone~

ninjamuffin99 responds:

rate 5 or die Ozone

Nice atmosphere!

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Da sphinx, with buttwings too

Lost in the motion of the ocean

Didn't expect the great outfit from the thumbnail I clicked on! Very nice.

Cancer on the glamour.

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